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Re: The Great Blood Heist [unfinished]
Hey Snoink! I thought this was great. I found a few typos, so I'm going to point them out like you said, but other than that, you did a great ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Hunted Chapter One
Hey Storygirl, The story was nice. It has a good main character. I looked up both Boothbay Harbor and Portland. You've chosen very beautiful settings. In 1996 ten babies apeared ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: DELETED
Hi Deadends, I'm a fan of historical fiction and World War Two. I like how you start on the homefront, since so many people write about the battle and the ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Melusine
Hey, I was intruiged, but you didn't lead up to anything. I liked the character and how she cared enough to tell someone else about it but didn't feel moved ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: New Here
Hey Cat, I found YWS really confusing at first too. I'm still finding new stuff around here. What genre do you write in? Do you have any other hobbies? We ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: An excerpt from my novel-in-progress, Shade
Hi MoonlightAssassin, I hope you enjoyed your first week at YWS, or at least by my calender, you've been here a week. I'm kind of wondering why you didn't just ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: Girls
This is for a contest. I'm not good at first person or romantic fiction or even short stories. I'm more of a novel person. Thought I would try something new. ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Cliche or Classic?
If the dashing prince who saves the supermodel princess, turns out to be running from his power hungry brother is it still a cliche?
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Ogygia-part one
Hey Moderncalypso, Welcome to YWS. I liked the idea. It seems like you've done your research on Greek mythology and have a handle on it. I would explain some of ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Would you rather....
I'd go back in time since I wouldn't be going closer to the end of the world, and I already know how the story ends. Would you rather have your ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: You know you're a writer when...
You know you're a writer when, after finishing a book or watching a movie, you say, "I would have done this differently.
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: What are you listening to at the moment? [2]
John Mayer's Stop This Train
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Cliche or Classic?
I have just finished a novel, no names. Where a reviewer called boy meets girl, they fall in love a cliche. I was then severly disappointed when the two main ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: hi
Hey cllouty, We're all pretty friendly here. Jabberhut already asked a lot of questions, but I'll ask some too. What's your favorite genre to read or to write? How long ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: A Very... er... Sort Of Empty Review Thread
Skins is done. Anybody else? *Staring at the still door, Megsug sighs and begins to ring the bell on her desk for fun.*
Jan 23, 2011
