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Hey Eternity, Welcome to YWS. Thanks for the review you gave me. Wow. This was... great. It was very moving. All I can tell you to do is reread this ...

My prompt was... A boy is stuck in an elevator with a mysterious hobo and a talking dog. He pushed the UP button angrily, fuming silently. I'm not crazy. He ...

Hey guys, I got great reviews for part one. Thanks bunches. :mrgreen: I hadn't actually planned to continue this short story, but some wanted me to continue for multiple reasons ...

Hey Giselle, Welcome to YWS. This was really good for a first chapter. There were a few things I caught, but they're small. I couldnt stand being hit another time. ...

Hi Storyweaver, I was intruiged by this story. I liked your setting. I've always loved the idea of a small town, as I live in suburbia, and the way you ...

Hey Deadends, I feel like I'm kind of stalking you now, since I just finished one of your reviews, but what can I say. I like pirates. :pirate2: Anyway, as ...

Hey Deadends, I didn't think you needed a preface, but this is cool, I suppose. There are a few things that don't match up historically. If Stanely was five when ...

Hey Moonlight I thought it was good. I liked the main character. I felt like he was realistic. The only thing I can point out that the other reviewer hasn't, ...

Hey emmily, I'm sorry it took so long for me to review this. Biology is a killer. Anyway, I liked it. The dialouge isn't very realistic. I think part of ...

Hey I also love music though I've never heard of Switchfoot. I know you won't believe it, but I love music too. There's a club called Band Geeks that I ...

Share your work with someone. I didn't for a long time until I joined this website. Just keep in mind critiques are going to help, not hurt. Megan S. America

Zoli I breathe a sigh of relief as the animals finally quiet down and glance inside the penguin encloser, curious about what the lead penguin has in mind. As I'm ...

Hey, Your grammar has improved a lot. I would have review this before now, but I just realized you had posted it so... yeah. Personally, and I'm sorry to give ...

Hey, I didn't read the other chapters, but I understood most of it... I think. I enjoyed this chapter thoroughly. There are a few things... okay, more than a few... ...

Hey, I needed something to review and saw this. I must admit, I was a bit confused, but the second part of chapter one cleared things up... sort of. I'll ...