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You know you're a nerd when you have a dictionary, a list of grammar rules, the UN website, and that stupid science website you have to have for biology in ...

Casey is done. That was great. Maybe this thread isn't so empty...

Here I am to review. Okay, it's very well paced. You did a great job. They saunter on in, long before the first signs of daylight, after a night that ...

Hey, I think this was my favorite chapter as of yet. I'm getting to know the characters as they are. Other than Kiada and Jared the others seem to be ...

Week Three I was there when they sat at church with enough space for a small child between them. The preacher was talking about marriage. He was talking of challenges, ...

Ally is done... Imagining a line reaching outside the door. Ahh...

Hey, I'm here to give you the review you wanted. First of all this is a great concept. A girl who has just got through all this drama with some ...

Hey, Pointe. There was some irony to this, and I might just be making it up, but I liked it anyway. I couldn't find much, though there were a few ...

Hey, I want to thank you for the reviews you've given me. They were great as was this chapter. It really threw me for a loop. I had to read ...

Hey, Hopefully the last installment of this short story. If it's not, I'm out of ideas. The whole idea of joining that contest with "Girls" was to stretch my abilities, ...

Hey, I'm here to review this agian. I'm glad you liked my review. I just... Wow. The first thing I thought, honestly, was 'Oh no, here we go. Another ghost ...

Ocean

moon and all green things

Hey, Things are really getting interesting. I think, in this chapter, you need to work on character development. I got confused with all the characters, though you have given most ...

I'm glad to help. I've made the same mistakes.