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Re: I Was There
Hey guys, Thanks for all the great reviews. In reply to everything you guys have written, I'm going to say that if I went into detail on why they were ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Never Like Pink
Hey, I love young voices that tell the story. Even though this wasn't technically, but I still liked it. I hate to disagree, but I'm a fan of stories like ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Hello everyone :)
Hey Kayde, I've played around with the thought of writing letters as a story, but it doesn't turn out that well for me. I had the same thought about people ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Chasing Normal Ch 4
Hey, Your story is definitely getting better. The dialouge took a bit of a hit in my opinion, but I'll point that out later. I don't know if this is ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Guardian Angel Part Two
Peter's ten year old brother, James' life was in the balance a few months ago when Peter wrecked his car. Peter, guilt-ridden, is followed by a red haired mystery woman, ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: The White Bible Chapter 2
Summary: An object of heaven, a white bible, has been taken from the pearly gates. Mitch, the angel duped into stealing it, has been taken to a heavenly court. Luke ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Cliche or Classic?
That really does make sense. That's what I've been trying to say, but I have incredibly failed while you have done a great job. There are themes that, in my ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: I resent this forum's name. However...[OPEN]
I'm looking for someone to tear apart my romantic short story. You seemed like a good choice. Let me think... No vampires, no werewolves, pretty realistic. I think I make ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Book About Pirates Part 2
Hey, I'm here to review as requested. If you need me to review anything else, I have a link that leads you to my review thread. This was good. I'm ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: I'll reveiw your Love stories and more!
Hey, If you could, please review this. No sex, but there is a very small reference. Is that okay?
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: Ranger's Reviews
Hello, I'm here to ask for a review. I'm afraid it's romantic fiction, but you said you could stand it, so here you go. Enjoy and please tear it to ...
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: Hello!
Hello and welcome, Your novel sounds great. I'll be ready to see it posted if it isn't already. You'll find that most of us are pretty helpful around here with ...
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: The Masquerader Chap. 5
Summary of Plot so Far The country of Maliel was taken over five years ago by a growing empire, Duritan. Ranael Laleor, the princess of the free Maliel, has become ...
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: A Very... er... Sort Of Empty Review Thread
I have read xiodinex's topic and reviewed. If anyone is looking for something to read, I suggest clicking her link. I'm now realizing I had a line of two for ...
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: I Did. This.
Hey, Here to give the requested review of this wild topic. Congratulations on everything this piece has won. It definitely deserves all of this. You've already had some raving reviews, ...
Feb 17, 2011
