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Hey Jessa, Welcome to YWS. I'm acutally following Kayde2. Working on a story together, that's really cool. I have a younger sister who's getting into writing now. We don't get ...

Hey, I loved your voice. It made the story seem like everyone could connect. To me, your voice made your story. The end made me go "aww" but I think ...

Umm... Thanks everyone for a review. If anyone could give me examples where I could reword sentences, I'll try. I think every author has a problem seeing their own mistakes, ...

Jai, Thank you for the review. Thanks all of you guys really. It's great. I didn't even have to ask for the second review, which is great, so thanks a ...

Hey, I know you're busy and have other reviews to give, but you gave me such a great review on chapter five that I want to you to review the ...

Hi, Spartacus. Welcome to YWS. Well, this is a site that definitely helped me with my writing and made me more comfortable sharing it with others. You're off to a ...

Wow. I have family in Greensboro. I love the Carolina coast. I think it's one of the best things about our state.

Hey, I'm not a big fan of exerpts, but here we go. Owen's pretty good. The whole mean father that doesn't really love his son, kind of rubs me the ...

Hey, Your story was beautiful and odd at the same time. I'm just going to dive into the review now. Is love enough to keep us together when you are ...

Hey, Okay, I have no idea what chimera chick is, but I'd thought I'd help you out. For one, bad grammar is a pet peeve of many people here. Try ...

Logan! I am also from NC. What area are you from? I'm in the Piedmont. I love fantasy and am actually writing a novel in that genre right now. It's ...

Hey, I'm here to give you a review in return for the one given on The Masquerader. Thanks, by the way. This was very intruiging and definitely has me wondering ...

Hey, I've got part of a novel for you. The first few chapter have a lot of reviews, but it's getting harder to get them. Here's chapter one. It should ...

Hey, I know you were probably going to get to this, but I did the same thing to someone else, so I think we're alright. Could you review Part Two ...

Hi MaxCat and welcome to YWS, Tell us a little more about yourself. What genre do you write in the most? I'm a fantasy person myself, but when I'm writing ...