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Re: Extinction DT
Has everyone made a call? Where do we go from there?
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Extinction
Sarah: Shock. Pure shock. I lagged behind the group, reminding myself that I should have gotten out more at Harvard. Slipping out my cell, I smiled at the one blinking ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: Extinction
Name: Sarah Age: 20 History: Sarah is the child of two talented lawyers and has inherited their need for a debate. She's lived in a weathly world that's been very ...
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: A Very... er... Sort Of Empty Review Thread
I forgot to say I was finished with Twit... Oops. Please continue with the review flow.
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: Uprising Ch. 2
Hey, I'm here to give the review requested. I'm a little confused setting wise with the Sir Max and the palace, and the kind of modern terms, but I like ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: Poseidon
This is my first action/adventure short story. I just had to had the girl, so I'm not really sure how good it is. I'm open to all advice. I know ...
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: I Won't Let Go (3)
Hey Rascalover, Thanks for the request. Can I just say this is a great idea. I don't know why, but it makes the pregnancy of the woman more real when ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: March Hare, November Wolf (1)
Hey, Thanks for the request and sorry it's taken me a while to get to it. I've had a lot of projects lately. I was pulled into this chapter. You ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: She's Such a Drama Queen Chapter 7
Hey, Here I am finally. I'm sorry it took me so long. Thanks for the reviews. This is the first I've read of your novel, so I'm a bit lost, ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: A Very... er... Sort Of Empty Review Thread
Kaf is done, and I can stop ringing that stupid bell. Yeah, that doesn't mean you shouldn't keep requesting.
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Country by the Sea
Hey Kaf, First of all, as many people have said before me, your description was great. I love description, so this was right down my alley. Your grammar, as well, ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: You...Whoever You Are
Hey, I don't know much about poetry, so I can't give you any advice on format or rythm or anything of that nature. However, I had some questions about your ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: The Masquerader Chap. 4
Thanks all reviewers, If you don't want points, I'm not going to give them to you. It's more to get more people to read this than for you dedicated readers. ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: How Giraffes Came to Be
Hey, The other review caught most of your mistakes, and said a lot of the things I was going to say. It was good for a fable. You had the ...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: Prayers
Hey, I'm not sure how realistic the voices are. That's really what I'm worried about, but I'll take any other advice, of course. Thanks. Jenna- This is not from personal ...
Mar 11, 2011
