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Hey, You held my interest with this story. I'm not sure what you want help with as you've done a good job with description so I'm just going to cover ...

I'm not sure on this chapter. Any advice, as always, will be welcome. I know it's short. Welcome to the world of my chapters. Anything suggestions on what I could ...

Issac I... like normal. None of this was normal. The talking rabbit was a small stretch. The Angel that wasn't an angel, the Chesire Cat (the for real Chesire Cat) ...

Issac I watched Isabel dance around in our small front yard and smiled when she came up to me. "Hey," I laughed as she pulled at my arm in a ...

Hey, This was sweet. As a christian, I think it means a lot, and the symbolism is great. Abel ran and lived. He lived because he ran and ran because ...

I decided to post this since Easter is coming up soon. I apologize for the many American sayings that may or may not make sense. I wrote this for my ...

Hey, Thanks for reviewing my vampire story. I'm here to review your, and as I have trouble reviewing without being picky and rather annoying, I'm going to give you an ...

I'm trying to make this more Dracula than Twilight, but I don't know much about vampires. I'm planning to read Dracula as soon as I can. If I've done anything ...

Name: Issac Shannon Age: 17 Alice descendant Appearance: Issac has brown wavy hair that is a bit untameable. He's thin and not very muscular. With sparkling blue eyes and a ...

Name: Mason Reighnbaux (Yes, that's pronounced Rainbow. A little irony for you.) Gender: Male Age: 19 Appearance: Please ignore the piercing. Group: Dusk Personality: Mason complains a lot. It's gotte

This was adorable, and it seemed like you had fun while you were writing it, which might be wrong, but I would have a blast. You might not want much ...

Well, someone needs to continue. We're a dying storybook.

Sarah: I watched the rest of the passengers drop out of the window, counting. We should probably know how many people we needed to keep up with. When the ninth ...

Name: Sam/Victoria Gender: M/F Age: 18 Position on ship: Cabin Boy Personality: Victoria/Sam is abnormally unsocial. She hates being pointed out for good or bad and doesn't forget any injustice ...

Sarah: I stared for a moment before instincts or my guardian angel or whatever kicked in. I looked behind the desk as the dinosaur focused on the boy carrying our ...