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An attempt of revival Troy Horn I must admit, being dark and mysterious is a little boring when we're walking through the forest aimlessly, looking for things that will probably ...

How many characters can we have?

Royce I think I was the only one on the bus to jump when we hit Artemis. To my credit, eight months is not enough time to get used to ...

Name: Royce Umbuesi Age: 17 Gender: Male Team: Apollo Appearance: Personality: Royce is from a rich family and is used to getting his way. Despite his slightly annoying pushy attributes, ...

Reserving an Apollo band guy.

Hey, Great fifth chapter. Okay, I'm going to throw you a curve ball. As a reviewer, I'm more into the "Here are the small things that you should fix" because ...

Stupid question. You said Apollo's band is made up of mortals and gods. Where would we put that on the profile?

Hey, You post chapters really fast, and I might be annoying you, practically stalking your novel, but I need something to review, and I'm interested in your novel. So... On ...

Hey, This set of chapters was my favorite so far. Layers are being added, making this more intruiging and such. With my novel, I hit a block with reviewers around ...

My Mother's Day gift for a few years now has been a little literary peice from the heart that tells her how much I love her. I just procrastinated to ...

Issac She's just her? That wouldn't look good on the page. I opened my mouth to ask another question when a guy appeared out of no where. I stared, wondering ...

Troy Horn I ducked as a pot flew over my head and popped the last of my berries into my mouth. When I had woken to the smell of oats ...

Thanks for the reviews. I've been in an anti-editing mood, but I'll get around to making some changes. Here's chapter six. This and maybe the next part will clear up ...

Issac "Are you looking for something?" I jumped and straightened, shoving my left hand, the one I had been writing on, in my pocket. Her voice was cold... but eerily ...

Hey, I got around to your first chapter. I'm a little confused, but I'm not and... yeah. It's interesting. You just have a lot of characters that you've introduced. Sometimes ...