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Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
Hey guys, I don't know if anyone checks this thread or remembers a really quiet member, but I'm going to try to be more active here after a very long ...
Apr 6, 2012 -
Re: what really happened?
Hey, You seem kind of new, so I'm going to say "Welcome" even if you've been here a few months. First, a lot of people on this site won't even ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: The Masquerader Chap. 1 Part 2 (rewrite)
Summary A vigilante is on the prowl in the country of Maliel, killing the conquering Durtanian Empire's soldiers in broad daylight. There still hasn't been much change to the story ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: The Masquerader Chapter 1 (rewrite)
I've decided to repost all of The Masquerader because most chapters have been drastically changed, and I've added a whole bunch. All advice is welcome and apprecieated. A force of ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Crystal Clear
Hi, First of all, I respect your mother's fight for life and sincerely hope that she recovered and has stayed healthy. The fact that this is a true story makes ...
Oct 6, 2011 -
Re: Caerowyn - Prolouge
Hey, It's good to see some new work of yours. This is cool and exciting. Some of the sentences aren't as thought out as others, but that will come as ...
Jul 20, 2011 -
Re: Removed.
Hey, I think I was just meant to review this because yesterday I was about to review it, but had something to do. Today it popped up again, so... Yay! ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: The X-Men: Revolution Era
Hey, I don't know much about X-Men, so I'm going to approach this as though it was regular fiction. Maybe I'll help, maybe not. We'll see. "I am a Spaniard ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: Assassins Creed - A glitch in the 21st century CHAPTER TWO
Hey, I'm going to tell you what I think of the work as a whole after I get my nitpicks out of the way. So... I suppose I should just ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: Extract From A New Story Idea
Hey, Tomboy Welcome to YWS. I hope you get as much out of this as I have over the months. I'm just gonna dive in a tell you what I ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: Parallel chapter 4
Hey, Your summary made this sound interesting, so I'm going to take a crack at this. You've got a pretty cool idea here. Regardless, I hope he’s glad to see ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: The Masquerader Chapter Six Part Three
Chapter One The country of Maliel has been taken by the Duritanian Empire. A masked vigilante has been killing Duritanian soldiers in broad daylight and getting away with it, pushing ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: Change and Survival: The Experiments' Story- Chapter 8
I am so sorry. Our laptop got stolen in the airport, so I had no computer, and... I haven't gotten back in the swing of YWS, honestly. Anyway, it looks ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: The Hunting Dog - Chapter 4
Hey, I haven't read the other chapters, but this was interesting and not so confusing that I wanted to quit before I reached the end. I'm going to go ahead ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: The A Team
The sound of heels clicking on the kitchen floor woke me from the light doze I’d fallen into. I guess a doze isn't a very heavy sleep, now that I ...
Jul 11, 2011
