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This was originally a story for my English teacher. I wanted to post it because I liked it. This was an assignment after we read the short story called "A ...

A squeal of breaks. Sirens. Bright white lights. James. Calm, soft words. Red hair. Golden eyes. James. His leg hurt, and then nothing hurt. He felt nothing. Even emotions didn't ...

This is for the Quote Me contest where we had to choose one quote out of thirty. My quote was:"A single rose can be my garden... a single friend, my ...

For a little background, this was originally a story for my mom on Mother's day. It was way simpler then (and better in my opinion ), but to make it ...

This is for a contest. I'm not good at first person or romantic fiction or even short stories. I'm more of a novel person. Thought I would try something new. ...

Hey guys,I got great reviews for part one. Thanks bunches. I hadn't actually planned to continue this short story, but some wanted me to continue for multiple reasons ranging from ...

My prompt was... A boy is stuck in an elevator with a mysterious hobo and a talking dog.He pushed the UP button angrily, fuming silently.I'm not crazy.He waited, arms crossed, ...

Hey,Hopefully the last installment of this short story. If it's not, I'm out of ideas. The whole idea of joining that contest with "Girls" was to stretch my abilities, and ...

Week Three I was there when they sat at church with enough space for a small child between them. The preacher was talking about marriage. He was talking of challenges, ...

Spoiler! : Peter's ten year old brother, James' life was in the balance a few months ago when Peter wrecked his car. Peter, guilt-ridden, is followed by a red haired ...

Spoiler! : This is my first action/adventure short story. I just had to had the girl, so I'm not really sure how good it is. I'm open to all advice. ...

Spoiler! : I decided to post this since Easter is coming up soon. I apologize for the many American sayings that may or may not make sense. I wrote this ...

Spoiler! : This is for Azila's contest. I had the romance genre and my story had to have the color blue in a note for later on, I have a ...

Spoiler! : Okay, this is for the random theme contest. I'm not really happy with the ending, but I need to finish something now. My theme was...Your story is about ...

They both think it's all happening a bit fast.

Rated for references and implications rather than actual content.

Rated for implications, not actual content.

For a contest; rough concept; looking for critiques on understandability