meggy86

Thanks for all the input! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed reading it. I went back and tried to make the transition between the 7th and 8th stanza more clear ...

Thanks for the advice! I have to admit, I've actually never been on a plane in my life, so I was pretty much just making this all up. I probably ...

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How do you post pictures? Do you copy and paste them or add them as an attatchment?

All I can say is... wow! I absolutely love all of these photos, but the first one is my favorite. I love the angle of the shot, and the way ...

Okay I pretty much just rewrote the poem including punctuation (which you forgot to include) and any other changes I though might work. You can read through it and see ...

Stabbed through the heart piercing every bit of hope and all that remained was memories that were cold This stanza doesn't really make sense. Each line presents an idea with ...

You're right, the plot is a little bit unclear but it sounds like its going to be a great story. The last few paragraphs really caught my attention and I ...

They sat there in silence for a moment, just happy to be in each other’s presence. Staring out the window, Riley watched as the clouds began to darken. The soft ...

An onslaught of rain poured down from grey, lurking clouds above me as lightning bolts stridently lit the sky. This is fine as it is, but it might sound better ...

[quote]An onslaught of rain poured down from [b]grey, lurking clouds above me [/b]as lightning bolts stridently lit the sky. [/quote] This is fine as it is, but it might sound ...

Dear Jiggity, I like it! I've got to admit, I had to read it through twice before I completely understood what was going on but now it makes sense. It ...

Dear FragileHeart, I love it! It has a sad ending but it's still amazing. You build great characters and develop an interesting plot in just a few paragraphs! Amazing! You've ...

I love it! Just watch out it doesn't get to Twilighty and cliche.

Good imagery! It's sort of confusing in some places, but pretty much everything I have to say is covered above. Oh, well.