meggy86

I love it! But is it over or is there going to be more? I couldn't quite tell.

I love it! I've got to agree with the others, though, I thought Lucas was at least 15 or 16. Still, I can't wait to read more. Keep writing!

Sorry, I don't have time for a full-blown review but Rain Wanderer pretty much covered my complaints. I absolutely love the story so far. It's exactly the kind I love ...

I don't have time for a full blown review right now, so I'm going to be quick. It sounds like you have a pretty decent story so far. My main ...

This sounds like its going to be a great story and I can't wait to read more. Still, I have a few complaints. First of all, there are tons of ...

Riley watched him swim away with growing apprehension, certain that the kiss they had shared on the plane would be their last. She gnawed nervously at her lower lip and ...

Pretty good! The main problem I found was that you use a lot of unnecesary words that just gunk up your poem instead of making it better. I think that ...

Looking back on this story, which I wrote a few weeks ago and am now posting in four parts, I realized it isn't really that great of a story. Still, ...

For a poem written on the spot, it's pretty good. Nevertheless, I have a few suggestions, which you should feel free to ignore if you so choose, most of which ...

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The girl unveiled her deep brown eyes, as she awoke into a new day. Mel sighed and got up. These sentences don't really match up; you switch from calling the ...

I love it! =]

I think that picture is amazing! It looks so realistic it could be a black and white photo. I've tried drawing people before and they never work out quite right, ...

Sure, none of these sketches have anything on Van Goh, but you said you drew these in only five minutes?!?!?! (I hope that means five minutes per sketch, not five ...

Wow! Those pictures are amazing! The bright, sharp colors of the fireworks contrast beautifully with the black night sky. The lines are so crisp, too. I can never manage to ...