megefford

Hey there. I like this. It sounds like there is something extra that you don't know about, something interesting. There is the number 4 missing though, in the count. I ...

I really like the story- after I review this I am going to look for chapter 2. Okay just a few things jumped out at me: "There’s an empty seat ...

The title Diary works, but if you aren't happy with it then maybe just let it sit in the back of your head and read in over from time to ...