meganTQ

Hey, I really liked this and you have obvious talent for imagery. One thing I would change: Rippling blues and silvers, like shimmering pearl ribbons I'd take out 'like' just ...

I really like this, it's a great start because it makes you want to read on. Two teeny nitpicks: The horse moved slowly up the gentle incline, pulling the carvan ...

Hi, I know this poem was posted quite a while ago but I stumbled across it and just HAD to comment! I ADORE this poem it's the cutest thing ever ...

This was a fascinating read and I totally agree with you. The only thing I would suggest is changing the word 'bothered' right at the end to something a bit ...

First of all I have to say this is amazing! I love your poetic writing style and the way you can almost hear the narrator speaking to you. I have ...

Hi, I really liked this poem it's so sweet! Only two tiny nitpicks: *tongue. And in the last stanza where it says If there was a way you could.. If ...

Hi, if you've got the time it'd be great if you could take a look at this: Thanks, Megan

I don't know if i've stumbled across this too late but I hope not! I've got four poems on here and would love a review for any of them, feel ...

Hi Pixie, I love your poem and the dreamlike quality it's got. I have a few suggestions, not problems just things that (in my opinion) could be improved. If one ...

Hey, here I am as requested! First things first, I thought this was really mysterious and intriguing - I want to read more! And I think you have a brilliant ...

This is a beautiful poem. At first it seems sad but ends on quite a positive note, and I especially love your imagery and comparisons. I haven't got any issues ...

I really liked this poem and could relate to it. I actually respectfully disagree with the above comment and think you should keep 'as', but I agree the last stanza ...

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Hey, I've got a short story on here I'd love a review for, I'm not sure whether it falls into fantasy or not but if you've got any time on ...

Hey, I'd really appreciate a review on any of my writing if you've got the time :) I've written 3 poems: Topic ID: 82519 Topic ID: 82642 Topic ID: 82600 ...