megalapagos

I think your story has potential, however, I found it so confusing that I stopped reading about half way through. I found a few errors: " slumbered out of bed" ...

I have not written in a long time and this was the first writing exercise I sat down to do. This is not a novel. It's not even something I ...

What's in a name? that which we call a rose by any other name would smell as sweet to German to French to English yielded: What is in a name? ...

I'm no poet, but I enjoy reading it sometimes. I'm new and this is the first poem I have read here but I have to say...It's really good. It made ...

I really like this story and I hope to see it continued. One typo I saw, other than the ones that have already been pointed out, was: "I turned away ...

It's a well written story so far. I think Mattster pointed out all the typos that I was going to comment on. In fact, I think I agree 100% with ...

*Granted* But someone wished that you were you die. I wish for world peace

Hi PenguinAttack: I am a fellow oddball, as are most of my friends so I think we will get along just fine. Auf Wiedersehen, Meg

I am a nube too. Please let me know when you post your story, I'd love to read it and I love to give advice.

Hello, My name is Megan (Megalapagos is a childhood nickname that I recently dredged up along with some other interesting memories). You may call me Meg for short if it ...