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Re: Run (re-visited)
I thought that this story was great. It just brought you in and hooked you, and the feeling of fear and desperation and the imagery in this story was just ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: Island in the Sky
I thought your story was wonderful. it was so good, and you're writing was really good. So creative. One thing i noticed was in the sentence, "Dismayed, LYLE saw that ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: The Re-Creation Comet
I liked the plot, and the way that you kept the story simple, but I do think you should expand.I also think that this sentence, So he took his mightiest ...
Jun 2, 2010 -
Re: Blindumb
I really liked the plot of the story, but I think it was a little confusing. It was hard when we didn't know who, "He," was in the story. It ...
May 31, 2010