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Thank you! I have a history of messing up my commas. :) This review was really helpful.

Thank you! I'll work on that.

This story is a bit long, so before reading, get comfy! I wasn't sure exactly which genre to put this in, so forgive me if I put it in the ...

I thought that this story was great. It just brought you in and hooked you, and the feeling of fear and desperation and the imagery in this story was just ...

I thought that this story was really good at explaining her emotions, and giving vivid imagery of the scene, and explaining how someone feels when someone takes something or someone ...

I thought this was really, really good. The words flowed, and it was clear that there was a lot of thought and emotion put into it. I thought that the ...

This story is a bit long, so you might want to get comfortable. Will slammed into the hard, bumpy surface of the wall, his spine making a crunching noise as ...

Mitchell woke up, surprised out of his sleep. He heard loud crashing and smashing noises out on the street, and groaned. He crawled to the window in his house, a ...

This is a poem i wrote for English, but i thought that i'd post it. I'm not sure what type of poem it is. It might be free verse, i ...

I thought your story was wonderful. it was so good, and you're writing was really good. So creative. One thing i noticed was in the sentence, "Dismayed, LYLE saw that ...

I liked the plot, and the way that you kept the story simple, but I do think you should expand.I also think that this sentence, So he took his mightiest ...

The storyline is very good, the description is very gory, but adds a lot to the story, and I liked it. You have sloppy punctuation in the beginning, and sometimes ...

I'm not really much of an expert with poetry, but I think that was really deep, and you gave very nice description that helped me picture everything.And by the way, ...

I really liked the plot of the story, but I think it was a little confusing. It was hard when we didn't know who, "He," was in the story. It ...

The owls were howling in the distant night sky. Owls don't howl, they hoot.