mavisknightley

Hi! It's a long, long time since I published this, But can you review ? You got it! :) -mav

Accepting reviews of poetry, short stories, essays, and narrative fiction/non-fiction. Will give honest critique; I like to offer kind, constructive criticism and positive points! No book chapters ple

Hey Rain, I'd love a review for this narrative essay. :) Thanks for your time! -mav

While I like the name Boa best for this character, I would give this a try if you are still stumped: listen to the character speak. Often, hearing phrasing or ...

Hi Jyva, I have requested reviews from you in the past, and enjoyed your feedback so much I just had to return. :) This is a personal narrative/essay style piece ...

Hello Whitlinger, I am submitting this poem for a scholarship contest, and could really use some feedback. Whatever you have time for would be wonderful, but I'd really appreciate a ...

Hello Jyva, I am submitting this poem for a scholarship contest, and could really use some feedback. Whatever you have time for would be wonderful, but I'd really appreciate a ...

Hello marmalade, I am submitting this piece of poetry for a scholarship contest, and could really use some of your expert feedback. :) It was written about a friend of ...

Hello All, I am submitting this piece of poetry for a scholarship contest, and could really use some feedback. It was written about a friend of mine, who recently lost ...

Hello! I have what will hopefully be a quick question: I am unable to update my About section in my profile. Every time I fill out the form and click ...

Hello @EternalRain! Thank you for the kind welcome. I didn't think anybody would actually read my post! Haha. :) I really like your quotes, particularly the All Time Low quote. ...

Hello everyone, Back when I was 16, and a frequent flyer of the YWS site, I had never posted a topic in the discussion forums. I'm back now, so I ...