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Note: Makes obscure references to some items that may or may not aggrieve your self. This is purely fantasy, fiction. I was rummaging through my old attic one day when ...

I was rather... disappointed in the lack of subtle insanity, but still this is interesting, even though I've encountered a few pieces that follow that same idea, that they were ...

Confusing. Though I would say that it was your intention. Nonetheless, it is fascinating to read such a piece. I rather enjoyed the morbidity of this piece, the many references ...

I've just recently awakened to the fact that insomnia is a fascinating topic to write about, and thus have developed some semblance of a plot/storyline for my next piece of ...

Thank you Ellen. I was trying to emulate his style, and I'm glad that I've partially suceeded. I do not 'show' instead of 'telling' these parts as I felt that ...

Good descriptions. I particularly liked this part. He found Jacqui in the garden. She was cutting roses again, watching the petals drift slowly onto her lap, scarlet like blood. The ...

Thank you for helping me to rectify my mistakes. (The following sentences will help clarify, although I had not intended to do so, for doing so would remove most of ...

Could you please include any parts that you think are confusing? In some parts I have deliberately obscured the meanings of certain phrases or sentences, so do specify which parts ...

I like this story. Even though I cannot detect anything resembling a storyline (Which this piece might not even require, as it may be a depiction of a boy's life) ...

Right. I'm interested in any feedback you may have on this piece, so fire away. My first piece posted on this forum. I was in agony then. I was chained ...