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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Why?

    I saw your name in the Green Room and immediately recalled your "mom" poem I loved so much and I have to say that I am not disappointed with this. ...

    May 19, 2015

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Always remember who you are

    I want to give you a bravo for your work here and I'll admit that I'm surprised to find a work like this coming from someone of your age. I ...

    May 18, 2015

  • Short Story » Politics, Spiritual
    Re: The Dance of Church and State

    I want to congratulate on the writing and the fact that it takes an issue that's big in some areas and does not cause offense to the audience, at least ...

    May 18, 2015

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic
    Re: Flatlining

    I will agree now with everybody else and this a fantastic piece of work. Every line reminded me of the "love-hate" relationship between me and my siblings and I found ...

    May 18, 2015

  • Poetry » Health, Narrative
    Re: Call It Sanity

    I wanna say really quickly that I absolutely love your poem. Each line is moving, to me, and I can relate very easily and I have to say that I'm ...

    May 18, 2015

  • Short Story » Narrative, Horror
    Re: Just One Yesterday

    I would like to begin by saying that this an absolutely beautiful piece of writing. And I think its rather nifty that the title comes from a song by the ...

    May 17, 2015

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: The Elephant Service

    I'm not sure if you wrote this as a personal thing or not but if it's not something you went through you did a great job describing some of the ...

    May 13, 2015

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic
    Re: God is Calling

    I want to start off by saying that I love your poem. I suck at poetry and reading something this great really brings out a lot of respect from me. ...

    May 11, 2015

  • Other » General, General
    Re: This I Believe: Life is Beautiful

    This peace is simply amazing! How ever the first paragraph This I Believe: Life is a cataclysmic maelstrom of delirium, but at the same time, a fragile time of serenity. ...

    Jul 2, 2011

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: Life

    I don't know why but I like reviewing poetry, even though I never can write a good poem. Out of all the poetry I've reviewed this is one of my ...

    Jul 1, 2011

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: The Myth of Persephone

    I am a huge fan of Greek Mythology (and seeing that this was under the topic I decided to read it)!! From what I'v usually read about the persphone myth ...

    Jul 1, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Hunted ch. 7

    Just like Dragongirl I've just read your 7 chapters, and I like how you keep them short( as I said ine of my earlier reviews I don't like reading long ...

    Jun 30, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Hunted ch. 5

    Onl one thing. 100 meters in 20 seconds while swimming. That's believable. Charlie's 100 meters in less than seconds is hard for me to believe, even in fiction. Maybe shorten ...

    Jun 30, 2011

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: YWS is the Best

    I don't think I've ever seen an acrostic on YWS before. I haven't even done one in forever. I Like this one and I also like how you never mentioned ...

    Jun 30, 2011

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Deleted 13

    I like it. The....emotions and description are really well written. I agree with what you said about the last stanza also being cloned as the first (It'd be really cool). ...

    Jun 30, 2011

I cannot separate the aesthetic pleasure of seeing a butterfly and the scientific pleasure of knowing what it is.
— Vladmir Nabokov