matthewmazer

(If this should be somewhere else please tell me or get someone to move it please). If you're reading this and you can play any musical instrument, wether you play ...

Just like Dragongirl I've just read your 7 chapters, and I like how you keep them short( as I said ine of my earlier reviews I don't like reading long ...

Onl one thing. 100 meters in 20 seconds while swimming. That's believable. Charlie's 100 meters in less than seconds is hard for me to believe, even in fiction. Maybe shorten ...

I don't think I've ever seen an acrostic on YWS before. I haven't even done one in forever. I Like this one and I also like how you never mentioned ...

I like it. The....emotions and description are really well written. I agree with what you said about the last stanza also being cloned as the first (It'd be really cool). ...

As Ronny was walking out of his blue tent, Skylar made confusion on when the schedule was due to camp Horizon. Camp Horizon was not just any camp It was ...

Sharp, teeth that were already dripping with my blood closed in on my arm and the pain made me want to scream bloddy murder. The teeth moved their way up ...

I had made an awful mess

The diner smells of death and brew. Usually when I see something this big I leave because of the length(I have a short attention span), but this sentence definitely got ...

Ima guess the point is that is that the person who is 'speaking' in the poem has had their friend abandon/leave them? If so then yes. 1)I really don't look ...

First off I wanted to say that I didn't find any grammaratical errors that(Im not the best with grammar however). Second thing is that the beginnig is pretty cool with ...

Second Chapter YAAAAAAAAAY! (Realy like your DF series). And like I said in my first review I like the idea of the people being trapped inside a game and it ...

I wants a cookie :-(. I like the humor you and your friends put into the story and I like how vlodermort and harry were acting kind of childish. There ...

Huuuuuge fan of the Percy Jackson series (I've read it all the way through a good two or three times). May is Luke's mom and the god youre talking about ...

I'll start off by saying I also like the L4D games, and me and my dad are huge zombie fans. The beginnin was pretty good to where the character thought ...