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Re: Deadly Heat!
Love it! As I said on fb chat, it definitely makes me think of that sweltering Summer heat we all know too well; that hot, sticky, humid, unendurable heat that ...
Jun 4, 2011 -
Re: Fantasy Novel - Chapter 1 - Exiled
Wicked. There's not much I would change about this... in fact, I actually really can't think of anything that you have really done wrong. Damn, I was really looking forward ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: Sunlight's Darkness Prologue
Well overall I found the prologue to be quite interesting. However, the opening sentence The barman waited a few moments for the customer to get a proper look at the ...
Dec 19, 2010
