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Re: The Assassin- Part Two
OMG !! I love it! I love how you left a cliff hanger at the end! It's amazing Cailey. :) There's a little typo as Nina said but otherwise it's ...
Sep 9, 2013 -
Re: The Assassin
He just gave me dirty looks every so often, but I'm good :P It would be great if you make it into a chapter story ^.^ can't wait
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: Prologue: Of Love and Friendship
I added a little more to the ending and took your tips into consideration, haha. :D
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: Prologue: Of Love and Friendship
I added a little bit to the ending, I hope it's alright ;P
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: Prologue: Of Love and Friendship
thank you :)
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: Prologue: Of Love and Friendship
sure :) Thanks xo
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: House of Whispers: Prologue
ooh, I love how you added a bit more to the prologue! It makes much more sense now! Love it Liaya! xo
Sep 5, 2013 -
Re: Journey of Sins
I love your title and how you set up the prologue. It just sucked me in XD the wording is superb and the description is amazing that it seemed so ...
Sep 5, 2013 -
Re: House of Whispers: Prologue
sure :) good luck! xo
Sep 5, 2013 -
Re: Prologue: Of Love and Friendship
Thanks InfiniteSnowfall :) Yeah I was thinking that too. Haha thanks for reviewing my work!
Sep 4, 2013
