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Re: Fear
Fear I'm afraid. Nail biting, Eye popping, Neighbor calling, Door locking, Stomach jumping, Adrenaline rushing, Prayer saying, Flashbacks racing, Throat closing, Frightened. But I'm panicking you can'
May 2, 2009 -
Re: Last Day of My Love
I really like this poem. It's very descriptive and I can feel the emotion through the text. Keep up the good work :+)
May 2, 2009 -
Re: My Guiding Light
I really liked this peom. It reminded me of when my grandma died not very long ago. It was a really good poem and I really enjoyed it. Ninja
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: Welcome to the Dark Side
I really like this poem. I like the idea behind it and the way you worded it. Keep it up! Ninja
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: Out of the Chute
You don't care who is watching you as you ease down. All you know is only one of you can come out on top, you or the wild animal under ...
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: Tonight
I wipe my face with my hand. The salty moisture burns where it touches my skin. No one has seen me like this before. How very weak I must look. ...
Jan 9, 2009 -
Re: Depression
Sometimes I feel hopeless, unwanted, alone. Sometimes I feel like I could jump off a cliff and no one would really care. Sometimes Tylenol looks like a way out of ...
Jan 9, 2009
