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Re: Inamorata
What is love? I can’t seem to understand why girls desire it so much. Yeah, sixteen and I still haven’t discovered it for myself yet. You see, I’m the brunette ...
Nov 9, 2009 -
Re: Dusk - still under construction.
Thanks for the comments everyone ! Just to let you all know, yeah im a twilight fan, but the weird thing is that i wrote this before i even heard ...
Nov 9, 2009 -
Re: Too late for Earth
I thought this piece was good But in the beginning I wasn't certain what it was that you were talking about. 'We crossed a line' If your talking about a ...
Aug 4, 2009 -
Re: thunderstorm
please let me know if there's something i need to fix. thanks everyone !
Jul 27, 2009 -
Re: thunderstorm
Why does the sky flash blue? Doing something, that always seems new. Booming sounds, that flutter my heart. Vibrating through the walls of hatred, smothering me with reassurance, I’m falling ...
Jul 27, 2009 -
Re: The Heart ache
Awe ! Bailey ! i love your poetry, i seriously do. there's nothing edit about this poem. cause it's just plain perfect, and there couldn't possibly be anything else for ...
Jul 27, 2009 -
Re: Dusk - still under construction.
oh yea someone did post it here for me. im not too sure how that works, but im greatful :D anyway, this story is kind of old, and ive been ...
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: Dusk - still under construction.
PREFACE I couldn’t remember my past, but something inside me knew that this boy was the key to my memories. Things were unraveling too fast, He was never going to ...
Jun 17, 2009 -
Re: Bubbles in The Whirlpool(Chap1)
Although you warned me not to read this at school, well i just couldnt resist. Your writing daws me in. And well this one in particular was alot of potential. ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: The Heart ache
aw he, bailey, iloveyou :) this is soo sad, and it's so good. it really makes you think, ALOT. The words fit perfectly, and your such a good poet ! ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: my love .
hi Kira ! :) well, I'm wondering who this poem is about ???? your boyfriend ?
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: To Lily
That... was beyond wonderful. The words flowed perfectly, everything made sense. And i swear, i could cry because of this poem. Since its based on a true story, it makes ...
Feb 27, 2009 -
Re: Coffee
And how it's taste can melt The coldest place in your soul no capital on "the". It's worth it's wait in gold. I don't really understand that part, did you ...
Feb 27, 2009 -
Re: Poetry for the broken hearted
Okay, so here's some more poetry, and i can assure you that its much better than my other poetry, i spent a whole twenty minutes writing all of these ! ...
Feb 27, 2009 -
Re: In the "big blue"
Hello there, Hun ! :D I just wanted to read something of yours. Since you reviewed my work, I'd be more than happy to return the favor. There were some ...
Feb 23, 2009
