marivisan

Ha! Haters gonna hate, but i really loved this one. Hehehhe I know I reviewed and edited this piece already, but I still feel like praising you. My first thought ...

It's review time! Very good piece this one, just like "Half Asleep", and it has, like said before, "good sense of hunger and freedom (...) which plays very nicely into ...

Hey Seastormy! I read your piece couple days ago and as today is the review day i decided to give my opinion. First congratulations, you made a really cool prologue. ...

Ok, the message you want to pass is really nice. And I enjoy the repetition of "i'm sorry", "that sucks" and "i hope things get better" Seems like you're "poking" ...

Love! Bravo again! You wrote another great story. And backwards! I really liked the description of the painting. It's rich in details and who's reading can perfectly picture it, and ...