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I like the poem part, but the rest is a little worrysome. Not everyone will feel the same way you do about what you write and that includes not understanding ...

When describing what the poem is about give more details. I like the simpliness of the poem, but if you are going to do something that simple write more/desrcibe more ...

The poem was good, but a little rough in some spots that I had to reread more than twice. Good luck liked it a lot!

I liked the script a few things though. Check your grammer and spelling. Also describe more of the surronding, more of who else is at the bar. Describe what type ...

I like the poem. Try to edit first though. There are someparts that are a little rough and confusing. I really liked how you backed up your reasons for why ...

I like it. Try to explain more of the students than of the teacher. It is hard to also see the setting. Try adding more people, but just as a ...

I was wondering if I could see more of your work. I like how you are taking a realistic spin to something that happens to girls everyday. Here is some ...

The beginning was ok. You need to show the setting and bring the charaters in a lot quicker. I was amazed at some of the detail, and I like it. ...

sorry can't help you that much. Try watching some old films of those times. Also try to narrow down on the location of where the people are. Then look up ...

I would say 1 or 2, but most girls I known aren't into things that are so much invovled with science. Its a sad thing but it is true.Good luck ...

This was taken on the island of hawaii!

I love how this picture came out I took it while at the beach down near hawaii's south shore.

Wow I love it. Where can I find and get your work no joke, It is amazing how beautiful something is when it is up that close. Try to do ...

The picture was amazing on how close you could get up to the birds. Try it in black and white is gives a different type of style. Also I liked ...

The picture is a little blurry and light. It was hard to see. I like how you explained what the drawing was about. Most mermaids have tails that look like ...