marie1larsen

Your welcome. Thanks for letting me know what you really want in a review and sorry I gave you something you didn't really need right now.

You're welcome! That's great you know about the indenting. I also tried pasting work that didn't indent on this site too. Oh well. I actually didn't know the English way ...

Sorry I gave you incorrect feedback on your work. Thanks for correcting me. I'll be more careful for now on!

You're welcome:)

Actually, i just spotted your previous chapters:) I'll start from the beginning! One more issue: To make your story sound more professional: "They all sat around the table and ate ...