mariannne

Here I stand on the eve of my birthday. Finally, I'm about to rise up to the ripe age of...17? Who ever heard of one being excited about that age? ...

pretty much anything that i could think to say was said about critical elements, but from just a readers standpoint, i like the plot idea, mainly because i love france ...

i really like this idea, it reminds me of the typical preteen experience. grammar is the only thing i would suggest, but i love it!