mariahneu

Thank You :) Just revised it; now what do you think?

Bin Laden and Hussein, Massacred by the media, Gaining fame by faults. Everyday heroes, Saving lives and loved ones,t Their stories forgotten.

Ooh, definetly improved :) Your really good at description and imagery and all that jazz. :D x Oh, thank you so much. :D (I hope the re-writes get better.) :) ...

Je juste ai dû dire autre chose en français. L'homme, Français parlant quand vous ne savez pas un mot de Français est l'amusement... :D (Babel Fish is POWER!) xD

No offense taken. Where can you take classes? Do they offer them online? (Any recommendations for good online classes, if there are online classes?) Thank You :)

I just re-wrote it, adding a little surprise to the last 3 stanzas. :D (For some reason, I couldn't write about anything else, but stuff to do with the military; ...

This was good. I liked how the poem flowed, how the rhythm was original but almost familiar. This is, however, quite telly. You don't show us anything! The first line ...

Welcome back! It's nice to finally see someone say, "Hello peeps". The word "friends" is so overused... lol Well, anyways, sorry to hear about your previous account troubles; I wish ...

Hey, Julia, a.k.a. Hamilton. (Way to go incognito!) :D And you are so right, Hamilton is a super shaweet name. :D My favorite names have to be Frederik, Carlton, Sherman, ...

Concealed aromas escape from bottle, A monumental vessel, holding precious cargo, Its misty contents, invading the air, Essence of rose, departing spray. Passion consumes, In air exotic, Propelled by

I have at least 15 websites, but none of them compare to the likes of BT4T because of all of the help that most of the staff have done to ...

There, what do you think of the re-write?

*high-fives* 'sup dudette! I thought I was the only one who said that :wink: ! Just a guess, but you strike me as someone who's into poetry :D . You'll ...

Hello Mariah and welcome to YWS!! Well, you sound like the hard-working type! Ah, I also dislike Maths...numbers are just annoying. If you do need anything feel free to pm ...

Hey Mariah, welcome to the site. If you'd like help navigating YWS or desire a critique, feel free to pm me. Lol. How are you, hun? And thanks for the ...