mariahneu

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I didn't really get all that interested in this. I found it dull. I thought the whole going-back-in-time thing corny. I feel that this would be better if the story ...

There's no ending for this story yet - I want to fix the first and middle portions of this story first before starting the ending so that I can get ...

Okay, revised and, hopefully, ready. What do you think?

Okay, thanks, will do. :) Also appreciated the fact that you didn't severely bash my poem, but rather critiqued it in a nice manner - thank you for that as ...

Our hearts sing a lively tune of young love. Faster, faster, Our hearts knitted together like a warm wool sweater, Your hands; heart - keeping me warm, A cold winter's ...

Okay, cool, thanks. :)

Be easy on her... Although it's not a masterpiece of a poem, it's really touching and I can relate to it as my great-grandmother just went through the same thing. ...

There, what do you think of it now?

I actually did have writer's block when I wrote this; writer's block with this poem, and writer's block with an essay that I was writing at the time as well ...

What do you think?

Revision 1 Writer's Block Trembling hands, Dizzy mind, Sweaty palms, Heavy eyes. Stressful soundless sleep. Mind awakes, slowly. My hand beholds my pen, I write random reflections. Clear, empty, wordl

There, that's better. :) (Just changed it)

Thank You :)