manisha

truthfully i have no idea how you would change it. maybe change the whole idea of the stanza. maybe a diffrent flow with the first line. i am sorry. i ...

are you an artist? only a passionate artist can bring colours to life the way you have. being one myself i loved the poem! i very recently learnt that making ...

smilelikeyoumeanit oh you didnt understand it? hope i havent made it too confusing. it about two brothers who are lost in the woods. Deepest mysteries hidden deep Canopy of trees ...

short yet completely beautiful. i really like the way the emotions are protrayed. love the title too. it really gives life to the story. Death. Here it was before her, ...

Deepest mysteries hidden deep Canopy of trees and ferns around Hyena’s laughter, rivers’ roar Sent shudders down their heart. In a mumble he said, 'brother I fear’ ‘Shush. Worry not. ...

hi. i am not sure what the story was all about. i liked it until i came to the end and then..well.. the ending, what was supposed to happen there? ...

‘Now now, Flora’ The eight year old laughed in delight as she slipped through her mother’s arms. The maids tried to get a hold on the scurrying Flora. ‘Run Flora, ...

oh my god! i loved it. totally! it had me gripping all the while. It thrills me. Makes me feel alive. More alive than I've ever been you have way ...

hi. i am a serious fan of harry potter and it felt great reading a story connected to it. This South American village held a large quantity of magical beasts ...

Red yellow strokes spread all across the sky, Strong breeze whistled in the vast field of wheat and rye. The moring rays of light sizzling bright, Early birds with a ...

hi. a rather creative piece. but has its own back drops. It stopped raining at the same moment I ended my son's life this doesnt make up to a very ...

love the bold use of the emotions. but the poem on the whole lacks a theme in certain. poetry is a form of expressing thoughts in the most elegant form. ...

hey.. love the bold expression of emotions.great job in getting across the character. could really connect with her. except the few mistakes it was a very sweet work. considering your ...

i totally loved it! you have the knack of making reader read your work on and on! the way it begins, love it! Peace. you just coudn't have got a ...

Flowers clutched in her fist, The bangles that danced on her wrist. Her white frock that flowed, Waved in the sweet breeze that blowed. The smile on her face, The ...