manisha

i have edited the faulty parts. hope it makes it better now!

i didnt put this under the romantic story category 'cause i dont feel something so dark can ever be true love. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

i really like the red girl. you have good shading patterns. keep trying! you will surely excel! :) - manisha

hi i would love it if you would review my latest poem [url]Boulevard of life[/url] thank you! :)

hi welcome to YWS i loved the story. you have a perfect flow, rather amazing for your age. love the creativity of the story. even the theme of being overimaginative. ...

hi enjoyed the read throughly! you have wonderful detail. [quoteShe was dressed in a long red gown with a slit up her leg, revealing her flawless skin. Her sleeves sat ...

dedicated to my two friends Julian and Bala. i still don't find it fair you left me like this. where ever you are remember i always do love you... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

it was a cute story. it brought the night alive. though you could work on your flow. I remember it all in graphic detail. We were sitting by the fire. ...

hi welcome to YWS loved the poem. it really brought ut the emotions beautifuly. great work. i really like the way you started the poem. Please don’t be angry, Mom, ...

it was a real good read. loved the display of every kind of emotions. you pulled it off really well. i still feel i miss something. or rather the story ...

thanks for the reviews. thank you adriana. i think i should have added a few more commas. thanks for the help. and i made a pretty big mistake in the ...

i am the hugest harry potter fan. i think the story was done very well. though it feels like you have just interchanged the characters. neville in harry's place. neville ...

i loved it. it was totally alluring. love the way it was made dramatic. My best friend is myself. I am Loneliness. Some may mistake me for my brother, Despair ...

the poem is about something i read very recently. it really moved me. as poetry is the strongest form of expressing emotions i couldnt stop myself from writing it into ...

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