manisha

This story combines four of my most favorite dreams I have had so far. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ‘Now now!’, I tried patting the sleek back of my horse. N

The ground shook as the missile came crashing down. I was immediately thrown to the ground, my hands flying to shelter my head. I looked at the part of the ...

The ground shook as the missile came crashing down. I was immediately thrown to the ground, my hands flying to shelter my head. I looked at the part of the ...

hey! it was real good read. I'v read all the chapters you have written so far. A considerable improvement from the first chapter to this one. This goes for the ...

My very own spot! no trespassers allowed! :) !

My turn! 1.Favourite colours: i usually have a 'witty' answer for this question. I favour no colour in particular as an artist prefers every colour! 2.Favourite activities: besides writing, I ...

There are unwanted times when I stand behind the railings, looking down at the pulse threatening fall. A confused wish flutters through my weak mind, a dark desire for the ...

hi! it was a beautiful story. i enjoyed the read. the flow was good too! Hey! Wait up!" A voice, no, not just a voice. One similar to that of ...

Mama A faint smile lit her face. I recognized the emotion in her eyes; I tried to shrug away from the sadness. I watched as she brushed away her grey ...

hey! it was real touchy! i really think you have covered all the needed emotions in this short would make it even more beautiful if emotions are introduced more deeply. ...

hello! was a good read. as i am supposed to review it i'll just point out the faulty parts. in the start i was confused about the gender of the ...

talk about twisted creepy and dark all together you get this story! you did an amazing job of creepying me out! Trick question, Terry,” the man on his back huffed ...

wow! that was seriously dark and paranormal! I like the way paul's narration flows. it somehow added to the creepiness of the whole plot. when i started reading i didnt ...

oh you think so? truthfully i was i hurry. i didnt actually work on it at all. but something is something. i think i will edit it to get in ...

hi! i like the way you have brought out what heis going through (i am assuming its a male :)) . though i would have preferred a diffrent start. Don't ...