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Re: What don't you like about vampire stories?
Brilliant idea Mazohyst , about a different breed . I love and [s]and am so using it .[/s] (: Anne Rice is just an amazing writer . Sometimes , I'll ...
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Re: Lies
Overall , the thoughts in this seemed scattered . Like you were zoning out while writing . You reallyy need to stick to a certain tense or you risk confusing ...
Jul 20, 2009 -
Re: 1984 Book Reports
I have to write seven entries , three hundred words long , on anything about 1984 . Characters , motifs , symbols . I'd rather have a ten page research ...
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Re: Effect vs. Affect
Latin ! This is wonderful , thanks for the Latin words , that helped very much . (:
Jul 19, 2009 -
Re: Advanced Character Development
One . humble Unable to laugh at yourself ? compassionate Pushover funny Doesn't take anything seriously go w/ the flow kind of person Can ' go ' with the wrong ...
Jul 19, 2009 -
Re: Love scenes
Hmm well honestly I think a lot of romantic scenes are used as a hindrance to plots , but on purpose . A love scene between two detectives who are ...
Jul 19, 2009 -
Re: Non-Cliched Beginnings
Oooh first lines are soo fun . There's a wonderful book out there that starts with the line , " When I was little , I used to think of ...
Jul 19, 2009 -
Re: The Prologue
Stephen King wrote a book in which Chapter One was the prologue . Though it was titled Chapter One , the characters and events happening within it were completely separate ...
Jul 19, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 10
Ohnoooo there's no more for me to read D: Now I'm sad (: Anyways , the way you bring out emotions is incredible . I love Knight . I think ...
Jul 19, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 9
UTTER SHOCK . Poor tattoo woman . I love Knight . Tommy is so sweet . I love Knight . This experiment thing sucks . I love Knight . Where ...
Jul 19, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 8
Damn I noticed two or so errors but I was too involved in the story to notice . D: I don't want TDA and Wren to fight . And Tommy ...
Jul 19, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 7
Dayum girl . You write some twisted stories . (: I love them . though I was sure we were already on live television, The only thing I noticed . ...
Jul 19, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 6
One thing that bothered me was how cold Wren has gotten. She seems to resent everyone around her and feels no sympathy for Jensen, Mattie, or her father. Has something ...
Jul 19, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 5
Ohh . The poor mother . Eep I can't write any more as I must read on ! :D But wonderful chapter , and I'm very frustrated with Mattie . ...
Jul 19, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 4
WHOA ; That was intense . I loved it . There was no way he could have heard me, but Phil Hendrick knew an invitation when he saw one. His ...
Jul 19, 2009
