mandeyy

Sometimes life hands you things That you don’t want to hold , But they say you must go on, strive forth, Go into the world and be bold. What do ...

Thank you guys some of your reviews made me smile(: I'll work on other things, and as for the font i fixed that. examples are always nice, thank you again!

don't you hate reading all the things you wrote when you're young and thinking , i was so pathetic ?

You told me not that you were leaving, You told me not of what I wanted to hear, You simply left me grieving, Growing sadder with each tear. Immediately I ...

Thank you guys ! I've rewritten my whole thing because I couldn't stand it , see above edit on original post .

All that you took Is all that you'll take; Those sugarcoated numbers All equal a fake. I love the first two lines . They drew me in with their rhythm ...

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Hahaa now I feel bad , because what you just said was basically true . I had no idea what was happening here , I was just writing to write ...

Thank you soo much for your review ! For some reason I completely missed all those I's . :? Haha and the slutty thoughts thing sounds much better the way ...

TOGETHER AND APART Acceptance isn’t easy. CHAPTER ONE I stared at my computer screen. “Jess!” I waited silently for my sister to burst in through the closed doors. When she ...

Thanks (: Of the poems I've posted here , I guess I like this one best . But still x/

Thank you guys ! For my next few I'm going to write about Newspeak , Big Brother , and maybe something on Love and Human Nature ? Any additions to ...

Haha thank youu (: Oh ho hooo :D That's quite funny , I'm glad someone else noticed her ... superb control of emotions . Oh dear that's terrible . ): ...

I just read all three of these poems . The first one was incredible . The second one confused me . All I could think was sex on the side ...

Because it's tired of beating as hard as it can I liked this line . And then being ripped out by people it cares about Awkwardly long , and weird ...