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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Ride

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    May 28, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: He doesn't know the truth

    What doesn't he know? That kind of bothers me. Anyway, it's review time: 1. I tried to sing this in my head, and it doesn't sound like Lyric Poetry to ...

    Dec 23, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Roxxie

    1. The black line outlining her should be a little darker and bolder. 2. I don't think the gray stripes overlapping into the white look good. 3. Her bottom foot ...

    Dec 22, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Chupacabra

    1. One leg looks stiff, and the other has an elbow pointing the wrong way. 2. The foot is backwards, and looks like a hoof. 3 & 4. I agree ...

    Dec 22, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Slide - Photography - [Updated Dec. 6]

    All of them are beautiful. You may just be the best photographer I know! Memorials I didn't really like the color of the picture. I think it would look better ...

    Dec 22, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: I'm not all that great at introducing myself..

    I have a few questions for you: 1.) If you were ice cream, what flavor would you be and why? 2.) What is your favorite thing to photograph? 3.) How ...

    Dec 22, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Repentance

    This is really good. I'm a sucker for black and white photos. Review time: 1. Like everyone else said, it needs a little color. 2. Like lavabubblingout, I don't know ...

    Dec 21, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: I'm not all that great at introducing myself..

    Those all sound really cool! What is favorite genre to write in? Are you working on any short stories or novels right now? My favorite genre is Romantic Fiction, and ...

    Dec 21, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: I'm not all that great at introducing myself..

    *What's your favorite color? Purple, Black, Green. *What's your favorite book or author? L.J Smith, David Clement-Davies, Holly Black. Just to name a few. *If you were any animal which ...

    Dec 21, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: I'm not all that great at introducing myself..

    My name is Mandy. I have a child, Daniel. He is five years old. I'm German, Irish, and Norwegian. I graduate high school May 21st. After graduation, my plans are ...

    Dec 20, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: My Sister

    I like the last two pictures the best. They look more natural. The first seems too fake to me. 2nd and 3rd: The lighting is really great. I have nothing ...

    Dec 20, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Times Change

    First of all, you should re-size your pictures before you post them. It's very annoying to wait for the picture to load, then scroll to look at the picture. The ...

    Dec 20, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Oh Ruben of Wonky Eyes

    One thing I noticed is that he is too broad shouldered. That makes his head looks smaller than his body. The next thing, his right eye is higher than his ...

    Dec 20, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: My first attempt at photography

    For your first attempt, that is really good. The sky is beautiful and the mist makes the atmosphere of the picture seem dark. The post is a bit distracting though. ...

    Dec 20, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Wolf

    You are a very good artist. [: My favorite part of the whole thing is the teeth. They look very realistic. The only thing I see wrong is the left ...

    Dec 20, 2009


Should we not walk? On our feet? The ones I now have again? I do like my feet. They are befittingly perambulatory.
— Pattern (Rhythm of War by Brandon Sanderson)