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Re: Estée
Hey everyone! So, in Religion class the other day we were reading the Book of Esther and in my post-novel depression (I just finished my first novel and now I ...
Mar 5, 2017 -
Re: General Request Repository
Hey all! Can someone please review the first chapter of my novel called Axylia, the story of a Fae girl who is raised as a human, forced to flee the ...
Jan 6, 2017 -
Re: I take requests for reviews!
Hello! Could you please take a look at the first chapter of my novel Axylia? It's a fantasy about a Fae girl who is raised in the human city of ...
Jan 6, 2017 -
Re: What are you currently reading?
I'm reading two books simultaneously: The Dream Thieves by Maggie Stiefvater and The Song of Achilles by Madeline Miller. Both brilliant books!
Jan 6, 2017 -
Re: is this racism?
So you might want to look into colourism. Colourism says dark= evil and light= good. While yes, people will take offence to everything, you have to do much, much more ...
Jan 5, 2017 -
Re: is this racism?
I begin with a question: which racial groups do you associate light-colored hair and eyes with? And the answer to that question is why I agree with Rosey on the ...
Jan 5, 2017 -
Re: is this racism?
Does anyone, or could anyone, take offense to this? Yes. I guarantee you that with almost anything you write, someone, somewhere, could be offended by it. Do your best to ...
Jan 4, 2017 -
Re: is this racism?
Hello all, I have a question about the way my story works. In my novel that I'm working on, Fae (the "good guys") have white-blonde hair and sea-green eyes, although ...
Jan 4, 2017 -
Re: Hi everyone!
hey maya! Late welcome to YWS, you're doing awesome with those reviews! :) If you've got any questions about the site or just anything in general, feel free to ask ...
Jan 2, 2017 -
Re: My Book Idea
Ooh! Cool idea! I love the concept of natural disasters being caused by an external force! I'd like to see how you expand on this? You've got enough for a ...
Jan 2, 2017 -
Re: i'll give you a detailed review :)
Hey everyone! Maise here and I'd love to review your writing! What will I review? I'm open to any short story or novel. I prefer contemporary or fantasy but anything ...
Jan 2, 2017 -
Re: Hi everyone!
hey maya! beautiful name
Jan 1, 2017 -
Re: Squires' Dormitory
Hi! I'd like to be a squire, please :)
Jan 1, 2017 -
Re: if you want your writing to be completely torn apart cmere
Hi! If you don't mind, could you please take a look at the first chapter of my novel ? It's the first thing I've posted on here and I'd love ...
Jan 1, 2017 -
Re: writing things that make zero sense
Hey everyone! I'm currently 35,000 words into a novel and I've come to recognise a few recurring patterns in my writing. One of them is that I always seem to ...
Jan 1, 2017
