maiko_koto

Well, I won't be the one to come in with an obvious need for a correction. I thought it was really good!! I loved how descriptive you were and I ...

This is from Final Fantasy X-2, which I'm guessing Teeeeo likes a lot. But that's alright. Personally, I've played it twice. >.< Well, thanks for the translation! :)

I think this story is okay so far, but I think that you might have been rushing through the story a little and I think that it would be a ...

Wow! Awesome Story! I just read all 6 parts, and I have to say that you did a really nice job! I really like your characters! I can't really critique ...

Hmmm, seems like you must have made corrections since the first time, cause i don't really see all those grammar errors they were talking about...........I think you need to post ...