maiko_koto

[pre] When she awoke the sun was just beginning to set and she decided that that was perfect. She quickly went through her closet and pulled out a dark blue ...

Thank you very much for reading it!! I'm very grateful for all of your advice! I hadn't even thought of those things, but they are very helpful! Thank you for ...

Well, I won't be the one to come in with an obvious need for a correction. I thought it was really good!! I loved how descriptive you were and I ...

This is from Final Fantasy X-2, which I'm guessing Teeeeo likes a lot. But that's alright. Personally, I've played it twice. >.< Well, thanks for the translation! :)

I thought that was a really cool poem. I'm very bad at poetry, so I thought it was cool that you could actually rhyme! 0_0 Maybe I'm easily amazed..........but still, ...

I think this story is okay so far, but I think that you might have been rushing through the story a little and I think that it would be a ...

Wow! Awesome Story! I just read all 6 parts, and I have to say that you did a really nice job! I really like your characters! I can't really critique ...

This is a story I wrote a while ago, and I wasn't exactly sure how to split it up, so here's the first part. I 'm sorry if it's too ...

Hmmm, seems like you must have made corrections since the first time, cause i don't really see all those grammar errors they were talking about...........I think you need to post ...

Wow. I thought that it was very well written and definitely gave me the creeps. It's hard to find a scary story that is actually successfull in it's delivery so ...

Hello everyone! My name is Emma, and I'm new to this site and was wondering what exactly goes on here. I love to write and read, and was looking for ...