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Really liked the way you have played with language and used it so well ,the idea behind the story is also very nice

haha nicely written ,has a dark meaning to it but visualises reality ,the effects of drug abuse ,the reality

Very nicely expressed .Indeed today's generation has to cope up with the pressure of growing up too soon which leaves them no time to sit and enjoy this phase of ...

A well written poem with a dark meaning to it.What I am apprehencive about is that it punishes the body too much and in a grotesque fashion ,so just a ...

India is surely a land of contrasts .One the one hand you find poverty abound ,people trying hard to live off on two square meals per day and on the ...

I really appreciate this poem because it beings about the essence of a himan being and how one actually should be Vs how people really have turned out ot be ...

nicely written about the memories and how they are so fragile and can go away in a whiff of a moment ,it's very important to keep these memories stored which ...

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Death can be a very sticky issue to be confronted with ,lots of emotions ,high pitched shrills ,cold sighs and more over pouring of emotions .Many would dismiss this as ...