magiclukehutch

Thanks alot for your critique. I can't access the edited piece of this story because my laptop is broken and this PC I'm using won't let me download the story.

The girl was called Katy. Her friends were Bill and Charley This sounds like something a seven year old would write. I think you could write something better to improve ...

I don't really understand this piece of writing.

That was a good piece of work. Royboy pointed out the mistake. But well done! Keep up the good work! :)

Chapter One Kevin Kuff, the Prime Minister of Great Britain, sat at his desk typing into his laptop. It was seven o’clock and Kevin was absolutely shattered. He picked up ...

Thanks a lot for your critique dark light. You don't become a man/woman until your 18 and that is a fact. And you don't usually find terrorists under 20, do ...

The boy's agency isn't called Little Terrorists. Thanks for the critique. I'm good at prologues., but not at books

Thank you for looking at my work! If you ever need me to look at anything, just PM me.

u posted, be patient. I've had pieces of work not recieve a crit until days after posting it. But as you asked so, ahem , nicely, here's a quick run-down ...

I didn't really understand this but the description was great. It was at a perfect length.

Is anyone going to crit my work? I'm not going to continue my book until I get critique so CRIT!!!

I agree. You should say that you heard bullets flying past you and explosions detonating etc. Keep up the good work!

That was very short and I hope there is more to this poem. It seems like a great piece of work, but it's REALLY short.

I think I know this guy. A user called Chairman posted the same post on my other critique board so I think I've recruited another member. Hurray!

I really really liked that and I can't wait to read more!