madhatter58

Thanks for the reviews guys! Really appreciate it. I'd love to review some of your own works if you'd PM me a link to which piece. Also, I'm aware that ...

"That one," the girl murmurs. That one? What is it she's looking at? I clear my throat. Startled, she turns on her heel, a light-stylus raised as if in defense. ...

I enjoyed reading this! You have lots of detail, which is greatly appreciated. Just some little nitpicks, the first time you mention the hole in the membrane wall, you spell ...

This is just my first draft, so please rip it apart :D I realize the quality of writing isn't top notch, but I'm still trying to improve, so any help ...

If you meant to or not, you gave this story a very detached air to it through all the choppiness, which I really liked. It made it seem like it ...

Hello :D You might be familiar with this piece since I've posted it on this site before, but after a few months of hard thinking. The final re-write of the ...