madhatter294

I'd love a review if you've got the time :) thankyou!! feel free to look at my other one as well if you like xxx

I think it's about how the city is supposed to be full of prospects and opportunities, but there is no place for those who may need it's support ie tramps ...

Very impressive, I liked this piece a lot. Initially, it sounds like it could be another sci-fi, vampire-esque type story that are so common on here, and you're not sure ...

This is intentionally confused sounding!!! It's supposed to be a stream of conciousness -style piece, not overly polished yet. Have areas which I'm unhappy with but I won't disclose them, ...

The everyone, anyone could be you bit was referring to how it's a 24-hour good impression and you can make yourself out to be anyone you want. Not a very ...

You should add to this how to edit work previously posted, I can't figure it out at all ! :(

I'm not entirely sure if I've posted this under the correct category, but oh well. This is my first posted piece so reviews would be greatly appreciated :) It’s so ...

I like the way you have "depreciated" if you like, the dramatic event portrayed of bombs going off which parallels and helps to convey Gabrielle's nonchalant attitude, although I think ...

I understand what you're trying to get at here, and it's very good, the two previous reviews you have received seem a bit negatie, but it is a really good ...