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Re: just another persons reverie
Just Another Person's Reverie why do i have to feel this pain? when all i do is just to love again i probably thought that i will end up smiling ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Friendship
i really love your poem.. although i agree a little with jesica... but i admira the wayyou write your poem you did well in this one keep it up i ...
Feb 9, 2009 -
Re: What book are you currently reading?
i'm reading the novel "Be Mine" but only when i drop by the bookstore because i dont have enough money to buy that book
Feb 9, 2009 -
Re: misery
thank you knightlyangel i promise to make it better next time :D
Feb 9, 2009 -
Re: misery
thank you springrain and milaScribler... I,m sorry about those few words I'm really not good in grammar maybe that's the reason why I encounter problems in making my poems.. but ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: misery
thank you break-my-heart... dont worry i will check some of those lines.. thank you for apreciating my work... you did well in your poems too i like the way you ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Autumn Kissed
i think i agree with KNS012....... you have nice choice of words which made the whole poem so AWESOME!!! you may have a little problem with some of the lines ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Algebra II Factorization Forumla
algebra sucks....that subject is a burden to almost all of the students......
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: Motivation
having good grades is the best way to motivate yourself ....
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: I need the Meaning Of
i heard a children's song uhm diddle diddle uhm diddle ay Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious! Even though the sound of it is something quite atrosicous! If you say it loud enough, you'll always ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: Arithmatic
wow math is the subject which i hate most actually i cursed this subject.. all i want to do is to have a time machine and assassinate all those people ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: Poem about splitting up
bravo!!great!!!nice... awesome..A+ :D i like your POEM ..no,,,, i love it.. HOW DID YOU DO THAT? can i ask some tips from you on how to write a poem like ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: Tasting the Air
hi there...madel here' i love writing poems too but i am not good with the way i have read your title and been intrigued so i decided to read this ...
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: The Little Voice
your so great!!!!!i was like WHOA!!!!! how did you do that?so awesome!!! i love writing poems too the only problem is that everytime i write a poem it always sucks...i ...
Jan 27, 2009 -
Re: Twilight
i think the message that you want to implement in this poem is great,,,, the only problem is that you are having hard time in how you construct each lines...i ...
Jan 26, 2009
