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4/16/14 Outskirts of New York Entry 2: Savaging and Ravaging After an entire day of walking, I had to lay down. My feet were killing me, and my eyes were ...

Well, I see what you are saying, the next chapter will definetely have more feeling to it, and I think you will enjoy it.

Good evening! I'm Regan, your reviewer for today. Red is gorrections and lets make..... this color the good things. I'll highlight the word/phrase then comment about it bellow the paragraph. ...

Chapter 1: I've been looked down on my entire life. It's made me hate humanity. It's made me inhuman. A monster in general words. You see, my parents kicked me ...