maddoxpatt

4/16/14 Outskirts of New York Entry 2: Savaging and Ravaging After an entire day of walking, I had to lay down. My feet were killing me, and my eyes were ...

Well, I see what you are saying, the next chapter will definetely have more feeling to it, and I think you will enjoy it.

Good evening! I'm Regan, your reviewer for today. Red is gorrections and lets make..... this color the good things. I'll highlight the word/phrase then comment about it bellow the paragraph. ...

4/15/14 New York, New York Entry 1: A New Kind of War I awoke with a startle. It seemed that the entire town was on full alert the past few ...

Oh wait, never mind. I seemed to have herped a derp. Name: Apache Mode (I also don't have a name, why? Harder to trace.) Gender: Male Age (any age, but ...

I don't know anything about these things, so that's why I said to talk to me on facebook. Jeez. And no, I will not read the Forum post, I can't ...

Maddox Patt, Hacker, Gamer, and to a lesser known extent, Pirater. I wouldn't mind bein' in it, hit me up on Facebook.

They are very violent... very. But don't let that stop you, they're a great series!

Oh, it's a pretty cool story. The idea behind it is that it's a Serial Killer, but he works for Miami Metro homicide. They get pretty adult, but they're a ...

Well, it may seem dark, but my favorite book series is the Dexter series, so I take a lot of my writing style from that. Running monologues throughout the story, ...

Hey, hey, hey, I'm new. Naturally, I'm also new to the site. My name's Maddox, and I should be here for a while. It seems like a great place to ...

I think that if you were to make this much longer, than you could have a great chance to put together a brilliant story. Perhaps a backstory, a method to ...

Chapter 1: I've been looked down on my entire life. It's made me hate humanity. It's made me inhuman. A monster in general words. You see, my parents kicked me ...

Prologue: This isn't a romance novel per regular terms. You will cry. I can guarantee this... the story I am about to tell you will make you want to help ...