madam-butterfly

i didn't see any grammatical mistakes, so good. (that's something i'm always critiqued for (i have terribnle grammer)) grammer isn't the most important thing in a poem, it capturing feeling ...

i guess you're right, once you read it it's a pretty sucky poem. i don't have any real poetic talent, because i can only write what i'm feeling i guess ...

i actually enjoyed this book, even though i'm not usually the type of person that's into sappy love stories, but this one was pretty good. it's sort of like a ...

My voice is truthful but my words are lying My spirit is resisting but my mind is complying My eyes are dry but my heart is crying My body is ...

I know I’m not far but I know I’m not here I finish this with the start that's supposed to be two seperate lines! :oops: :oops:

Opposite of life Time is finished but hasn’t begun, Shattered into pieces but still together in one. If I speak shall it be heard? If I’m wrong will it be ...

i've edited the poem and am reposting it as Opposite of Life(revised). please reread it and leave feedback! com'on i'm begging!

thank you everyone! i want you to know that i really appreciate all the feedback!

153. when ever he asks a question raise your hand hand and reply "i have nothing to say" very loudly! lol, these were freaking hilarious! but the truth of is ...

My voice is truthful but my words are lying My spirit is resisting but my mind is complying My eyes are dry but my heart is crying My body is ...

Opposite of life time is finished but hasn’t begun shattered into pieces but still together in one if I speak shall it be heard if I’m wrong will it be ...

this is really well written and the flow and rhythm is flawless. but... what the poem is actually about is hard to understand, i'm not sure i know what point ...

1st dimension: earth Annika laid in bed, wide awake staring at the ceiling. Her sweat matted her hair to her drenched forehead. She was aware that she had screamed, but ...

uh...wow. it was definitely strange but i'll say unique. lol! the mother-daughter theme is very unusual like kitty15 said, but that's what makes a story good, it's different from all ...

these are really good and very artistic! i love filtered sunlight and rememberance. these photos has an edge of mysterious purpose to them that makes you want to stare at ...