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  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Love Limbo

    Yes I agree with the shackles part, I never really thought of it that way! Thank you I will change that. I agree the ending could be stronger but I ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Love Limbo

    Yes that would work! Thanks for your review!

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Virgin Isles

    Thanks a lot I never realized my break in rhyme scheme, I edited it hopefully that works better I think it still fits with the imagery. :)

    Mar 30, 2013


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