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Re: Jungle Warriors
I peer through my rectangular rims at the approaching colony. The black and white mass squawks a battle cry and surges forward, tumbling over the green shoots and roots that ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: I drew alot for Raz
Ohmygoodnessyesssssssss :D
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Thoughts of a Call-Girl
Amazing. You're unabashedly adressing a subject that some even have trouble thinking about. You're diving right into it. I really like the seperation and the rythym. Though I don't entirely ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Reach For The Sky
Dear KAH, I really like the theme with this one. Again, just a couple of spelling errors. I know sometimes your mind is too fast for your pencil (well, in ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Apocalypse
[quote="Warrior Princess"] Madness and abandon swirling across the galaxies Transcend the final flood And one by one blot out the stars Light and darkness joined as onequote] I like this ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: The Tears I Couldn't Shed
Wow. This is awesome. It can be applied to so many things that people go through, so it's universally applied. "You asked me why I was closed inside, but it ...
Sep 17, 2010 -
Re: Sometimes
I really, really like this. (: The only problem was.... Oh wait. No problem at all. Haha. :D
Sep 17, 2010 -
Re: never to believe
I liked this. It really captured the hatred you feel. They were some pretty strong, raw feelings. You usually don't get a lot of emotion from a short poem, but ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: My Pencil
Awesomeness, which my spell check says is a word! Yay, which it says isn't a word. What's up with that? I really like the poem. It's good to know that ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: Smile
I really liked this. It reminds me of when I'm trying to cheer someone up and end up making it worse. I hate it when I'm in a position where ...
Sep 12, 2010 -
Re: Smile on
This was extremely well written. I like how it shows the passage over time, encouraging the reader to endure it all. There really isn't anything I would change for the ...
Sep 12, 2010 -
Re: Through the Glass
Mirror, mirror On the wall Who will be the first To fall? My brother has fallen Through glass Fallen in love How long Will it last? How long will it ...
Sep 12, 2010
